Stormclan Darkpaw and Briarpaw's journey for StarClan

SoyalaLeisu posted on Aug 07, 2010 at 10:33PM
I have to do this for StormClan! and she crossed the border.

"Briarpaw?" asked a curious voice behind her. Turning with anger and fear broiling under the surface, she saw Darkpaw staring at her in confusion. "Where are you going, Briarpaw?"

Smiling and letting it all out, Briarpaw told him of her mission. "Darkpaw please don't tell! StarClan is sending me on a mission to find Duskbreak and give him a message!"

Darkpaw stared at her for a moment. "I got that same message from StarClan myself! Please let me come too."

Briarpaw wanted a travel buddy so bad she invited him. As the territory fell away behind them, Darkpaw said, "Petalfeather sent me."

Briarpaw nodded.

"Who sent you?" He looked at her, eager for her answer.

"Fernsniffer."

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over a year ago brownstar said…
*follows and petalfeather mummers* be careful
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*nods* Yeah, thanks Darkpaw! ~Briarpaw~

*glances back* The wolves are almost here! Let's go! *stands in front of passage and glares up at wolves* ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*rushes in and sees the exit and flinches as i see a single brown wolf waiting, not showing any kind of threat*
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*stops short* A wolf! *turns to Darkpaw* What're we to do? ~Briarpaw~

*glares at wolves* You may not enter! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*looks calm* are you shadow *i asked and the wolf relaxed* i am, you are of stormclan, why are you in out land?
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
angry
*peers at Darkpaw* What!? (screeches) You're hiding MORE stuff from me? *bares teeth and raises hackles* ~Briarpaw~
over a year ago brownstar said…
shadow is the leader of fangclan! *i protested and shadow said quietly* peace young warrior
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
angry
*bares teeth and step forward* What, you think we'll want to even associate with you? *looks at Darkpaw* He might, but I want to save StormClan! *unsheathes claws* Let me out! ~Briarpaw~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*shadow looked at her* i didn't come to stop you, i was visited by a warrior from what you call starclan, they told me to come and help you out *I looked surprised* they did?
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
angry
*bares teeth* What, is everyone here expecting us?! I'm not here for StarClan! Apparently that didn't come across! I'm here for StormClan! That's it! StarClan don't care for a thing like me! *storms past him and pads away* ~Briarpaw~
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
sad
*pads in with wolves still at other entrance* Darkpaw! I've found you! The wolves wanted to talk in peace! *cuts off* Where's Briarpaw? ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
brairpaw *i whimpered and shadow sucked her head* i see she doesn't need us, we will leave *they walk away and i lower my head, upset*
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*peers out* Shadow don't go! Just one cat doesn't mean that StarClan be denied! I've been seeing them too! Tell me! Please! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*looks at her* what did you just say? *i demanded*

~darkpaw~
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
crying
Briarpaw stood overlooking the canyon. "That stupid--I can't believe he's been lying to me! What, has Kelsey been lying too?" A large fat tear formed in her eye and splashed over her cheek. "You were right, Fernsniffer, I should never love anyone!"

A shadow fell over her and her scream could be heard throughout the canyon.
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
blush
I--*is cut off as a loud scream flows through the canyon* What was that? ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*looks up* brairpaw *i mummered and ran to the scream*
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*follows* The Overlook! we must get there! You can say anything and be heard from up there! ~Kelsey~
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over a year ago brownstar said…
lead *i hissed and fell back so she could lead* i need to find brairpaw!
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*pelts past him and dashes uphill* This way! Come on! *leads him to Overlook and sees no one* There's...there's no one here...*wide eyes* But she has to have been hear. That's the only spot...*sniffs ground* She was here! And so was someone else. ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*growls low* where does it lead?
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*keeps nose on ground* I don't know! There are so many cats that pass through these mountains! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*eyes narrow and i sniff carefully* i can smell her and the cats, i know where they went
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*nods* Go, Darkpaw! I'm right behind you! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*races off with her following me and looks up at the highest mountain* there!
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*peers up and stops short* Darkpaw...we cannot go up there! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
you want her to die?! *i hiss* if you won't go i will!
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
worried
*jumps forward and blocks his path* No! No cat may go up there! *glances back* The mountain is cursed! There's this strange group terrorizing cats from up there! They must be the ones who have Briarpaw! *tears form* Oh no! Good heavens please! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*shoves her aside* i don't care, if i die, it's saving my clanmates, not deserting them!
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
crying
Darkpaw! You can't! They WILL kill you! They don't take strangers at all! They come down off the mountain once a month, pick a pretty young she-cat, take them up the mountain and torture them, then drug them up with herbs, then they sacrifice them off the mountain to the mountain Gods! Darkpaw, if they have Briarpaw, it's too late! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
it's never too late *i hiss at her and started climbing* if you don't want to go then stay down here
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
worried
*closes eyes and remembers her sister* Darkpaw! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*looks down* what now?!
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
angelic
*bounds up on rock next to him* You're doing this wrong! We can't just march up there and act like we belong. We have to get up there without being seen, heard, or smelled. *indicates tail* This way. ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*smiles and nods* show me where to go
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
sad
*dashes up side ravine* It may slow us down, but at least we'll survive. If you're friend has any hope. then we need to go this way! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*follows, keeping quiet and calm*
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
~Meanwhile~

Briarpaw rolled over, groaning. She couldn't remember anything at all. The last thing she saw was...there was a white flash and she saw large canyon. There was someone behind her...and that was it. Taking a deep breath, Briarpaw opened her eyes. They flew open in shock. There was no light. She couldn't see a thing. Screaming in unsuppressed terror, she jumped up and leapt forward, not sure what she was doing but not in control of herself in her major panic.

What she found was a wall. It was made out of some sort of stone, and it was keeping her in. Stop it! she ordered herself. You're not blind. You just can't see the sun, thus the sun cannot see you. That did nothing to contain her fear. Realizing that being like that meant that she was underground, which meant that she was put there somehow, which meant that someone had buried her.
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
sad
*leaps forward and sees pebbles falling down a bit* Darkpaw! Be careful! ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*has a bad feeling and thinks* petalfeather what do i do? *petalfeather looked upset* i'm sorry! *she whimpered in her thoughts* i can't do anything!
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
surprise
*rocks slip under her paws and she graps a rock ahead of her* ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
careful *i called to her quietly as i hung on to a crack in a rock*
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
worried
*finds steady perch and looks around the grassy plain* We're almost there. Come on! *reaches paw down to help him up* ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*gets up* now what?
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
hmmm
*peers at him questioningly* We're almost there. ~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*nods and sees her look at me* something wrong?
over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
worried
~Meanwhile~

Briarpaw was curled up in the corner, whimpering in fear when she heard voices outside her prison. With wide eyes, she waited. There was a light illuminating that her prison was in fact guarded by a boulder. The boulder was shoved aside, and she saw several cats enter the tomb. There were several of them. Two were carrying large sticks with fire at the end of it. Briarpaw's eyes widened.

Gasping and hyperventilating in fear, one tom entered and smiled at her. "You're all right," he murmured, and although his tone was soft, there was an icy danger about him that confused Briarpaw.

He flicked his tail and the cats marched in one by one until the room--which had seemed endless before--was so small and crowded. The two toms with the fire were fire red. The speaker was brown. The rest were all calico. The calico's came in carrying leaves of some kind. They rested the leaves inside a stone circle. The two with torches moved forward and lit the leaves on fire. Immediately the crowd of cats moved to the boulder door and shut it behind them.

Briarpaw screamed.
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over a year ago SoyalaLeisu said…
sad
*shakes head* It's nothing, it's just the way you said that...~Kelsey~
over a year ago brownstar said…
*waits*
over a year ago brownstar said…
*hears a scream* come on where next!