The old switcharoo 

Writing student who loves cartoon horses and all manner of silly things. Occasionally writes serious stories. A divine Swedish woman drew this avatar.

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Co An Sweetie Belle enters the world of modelling... and finds out some disturbing industry secrets...

Sl Spitfire goes on a relaxing vacation and stumbles into a surprise spa treatment from an unlikely source, complete with a Happy Ending. Contains tentacles.

Da Her unruly class has pushed Cheerilee to the breaking point. She wants obedience, by any means necessary.

Ro Co Things go downhill quickly, after Soarin buys a potion from a shady vendor to have a spectacular night with Rainbow Dash.

Co Spike comes home after a ten year sabbatical, only for Twilight to find out he's been very busy in the meantime.

Ro Co Cadence finds something for Shining Armor to do while she deals with Princess Twilight.

Ro Co Cadence and Shining are living happily after their marriage, but will a suggestion change that?

Ro Co Cadence gets her horn cracked, and while Twilight tries to fix it, her love magic runs rampant, causing the humble citizens of Ponyville to act out on their private feelings for eachothers. Clop/romance.

Ro Co Cr Can you really trust anypony? Tommy Wiseau's "The Room" meets My Little Pony.

Ro Shining Armour comes home to find Cadance pretending to be Twilight...and seducing him!

Ro Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armor have sex. Cadance finds out.

Ro Co [M/F] Ever wondered what would've happened if Shining Armour chose to marry Chrysalis instead of Cadence at the end of Canterlot Wedding? Wonder no more.

M Rainbow Dash & Braeburn's Best Day Ever

Ro Co [M/F/F] Braeburn cums inside Rainbow Dash and Princess Celestia. Back to back.

Co Twilight has been keeping Spike up at night with obsessive writing. One night, Spike's curiosity gets the best of him, and he discovers Twilight has been writing bad shipfiction about herself and her friends. He decides to teach her a lesson.

Ro Co [M/F] Braeburn cums inside Rainbow Dash

Co Sl When Sweetie Belle overhears Rarity asking Twilight Sparkle if she wants to scissor, her curiosity is piqued. Why is scissoring such a hot topic among the mares? What exactly is scissoring, anyway? Sweetie goes forth on a quest to find out.

Sl By Scootaloo's age, Rainbow Dash had won many competitions. As Ponyville's Annual Bounceball Competition approaches, Scootaloo dreams of following in her hoofsteps. With her drive, she knows nothing will stop her... except, perhaps, herself

Ro Co [M/F] Discord interferes with Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle's special night of wild horse sex.

Ro Co [Futa/F] "My name is Maud. I like rocks. I wear a frock. That rhymes with rock. I've got something under this frock that also rhymes with rock..." Maud's visit to Ponyville Hospital gives her a newfound appreciation for her cock.

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>>54568505456850 I can't help but think that image would be funnier if you replaced 'attention' with 'boner'.

Yay! At last. Thanks again for looking this over, guys.

Ok, I was gonna do a compare and contrast to another fic involving a very similar theme... and there is just no comparison. While the other fic may have been a good clopfic, this one is outstanding, and it has an actual story behind it!

Bravo on an excellent first chapter to this, and I am very much looking forward to reading more!

I'm pretty positive this story will satisfy at least ten of my fetishes...please go on!

>>54578355457835 Wow... For a story to attract YOUR attention and get THAT response, it must be good.

You know full well it's done, missy!

I just need to revise the following chapters. They're written already.

And that's what killed my boner and got me in the throes of laughter XD

The sex parts are geometrically impossible, unless it's anthro.

Fortunately, the rest is comedy gold (the puns are either awesome, or so bad they go full circle... except maregina. It just... isn't smooth on the tongue)

There's sentence in  this story that seems to be missing a word. I can cast it so it'll only a day or so.

>>54584945458494 I almost cracked up on it, but horsegasm is what killed me XD

I'm proud at having come up with most of these myself.

I'm glad you got something out of it! I find the most common reactions to my brand of clop are either to just beat off anyway or laugh a whole bunch. Either is acceptable.

Thanks. I like it when errors like that survive who knows how many proofreads. Bleh.

I heard that it's hard for retarded people to count to two, is this true?

So Twilight is tricking Shining Armor into thinking she's somepony else, in order to get him to cheat on his wife, and ultimate make hot incestuous love to her.

That there is the triple threat. Incest and magic fraud is one thing, but cheating, too? For shame, Twilight!

Don't forget Applejack using Twilight's body to get down and dirty with Big Mac.

Good start to the story, though as others have mentioned some new unique choice words are well.....um....different.  Probably reading between the lines far to much but picturing the ending scene(s) to well.  Where as Twi and Aj bet ends in a tie and both do their end of the bet for each other.

Sure, but that's only TWO crimes: the violation of a crucial societal and legal taboo, and the betrayal of her brother's trust.

Twilight's aiming to have her way with a married stallion, in addition to that! That definitely crosses a completely arbitrary moral line that I've decided to establish just now.

I do enjoy indulging myself with my wordplay in these stories, as I already do with the concepts (which are the silliest I can think of).

Question what will Twilight thinks when Big Mac NOW thinks they are an item, or AJ with Shining Armor and god help her, Cadence finds out, she is ogling her husband, or are they planing to do the switcheru each time they had the chance?

Um wow... this is actually a good start.  I'll be following this.

that awkward moment when i laughed harder at this then the newest chapter of WITLTYSO?

Gary Oak likes to put more goddamn puns in his fic than anyone else around.

I'm anticipating this twice as hard as anyone else because I already proof-read the next chapter.

I think I managed to answer those in the following chapters.

“A full ponytration's what I'm thinking of, but...”

“I don't want it from any other guy.”   dat rick roll doe

I was wondering how long it'd be before somebody caught that.

My plan is one every week or two, probably on Fridays.

I don't post multi-part stories unless the whole thing is more or less finished, which ensures consistent updates (and that I'll finish the story).

Every writer has their own creative liberties they like to hold and as long as it doesn't take away from the story, I could care less.

I myself have a special type of slang the characters use in my fics when they curse.

not bad for a first chapter though I hope the second doesn't feel as rushed as the first.

Twilight's face went red as a magical disembodied forehoof teased her maregina

The sheer naked force of so many puns has killed my boner. And "fresh filly fertility fluids"? Interesting use of alliteration and original as well, but not nearly as erotic as may be hoped.  Although, my absolute favorite was the description of a dildo as a "Plot Device". That was positively brilliant and more than makes up for the preponderance of poorly-planned puns. Well done, sir, and please post a new chapter soon.  MOAR!!

Rushed? Which way do you feel this is rushed, exactly? I'm curious to see if it's a big problem or if it's just the lead up to the sex part, as I try to get to those fairly quickly while still taking enough time to set up whatever whacky premise drives the story (I guess kind of like the Brazzers approach).

You're welcome. I was giggling when I first came up with that pun over three years ago (and still am).

This is one of the reactions I was hoping for when I wrote this. Thanks for reading!

Just thought she deserved to be credited here... Particularly since her signature appears to have been cropped from this particular version of the image.

Incidentally, I was the one who originally commissioned this picture from her. It was supposed to serve as the cover art for a story I was writing at the time, which, by some bizarre coincidence, had pretty much the exact same wincest-y premise as this one (give or take a few details -- and about a million puns).

But, uh, that was a long time ago, so I've really got nobody but myself to blame for getting beaten to the proverbial punch. It had to happen eventually, I guess.

Ah, thanks! I'd cropped the image I found somewhere (not her DA) many months ago, so I'd forgotten. It was cropped to look better as a Fimfic title image. Added the link to the source.

That's also an interesting story behind the image, heh. Actually, the reason Shakespearicles ended up prereading this was because I'd written, but not published, this story, and he published something of kind of a similar premise, and I contacted him.

The secret of life is: Incest is wincest. Pretty good first chapter, think I'm gonna keep my eye on this story.

The puns, Winston, the puns! They're everywhere. And funny, by and large. I particularly enjoyed your use of "plot device" and Rick Roll. I had to reread a couple lines to make sure it wasn't just my imagination.

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