~Story~
A detective by the name of Hal Moore suffers from mental depression and thoughts of suicide. After the death of his daughter, where he chose to save his drowning adopted son in hopes of trying to save them both, his son, Andrew, has been quiet and developed a sense of cruelty, assaulting and threatening other children and harming animals. His wife, Michelle, has grown to hate Hal after their daughter’s death, blaming him for not saving her and has become an alcoholic and started cheating on him. Though Hal does believe this, he still does what he can to help others. This has lead him to be a part of a case of bizarre murders that occur in Jamestown, a small mountain town that was once peaceful before the murders. Groups of families are found murdered, yet only one of them, a small child, remains alive after each murder, with a pair of moth wings next to them. When Hal is looking into the case, he is attacked by the killer, who has earned the nickname of Broken Moth, for leaving moth wings at the scene of the crime. After surviving the attack, Hal awakes to find that he has the ability to enter the minds of the survivors of Broken Moth’s murders, this power being known as the Shattered Butterfly. The Shattered Butterfly lets him see that the survivors minds have been tainted with dark thoughts by the Broken Moth, in an attempt for him to meet the Eldest One, a creature that only comes to one who commits such horrible acts on another human and are pure evil. Hal uses the Shattered Butterfly to do what he can to stop the Broken Moth from meeting the Eldest One, a creature believed to bring forth an age of darkness.
~Characters~
Hal Moore
A detective in the Jamestown police department, who suffers from depression after his daughter's death when he saved his son first. Her death badly affected his marriage and his life, making him more cold and cruel to those around him, not even cracking a single smile. He uses this to try and help those avoid the same fate. Although he tries to prevent more loss in Jamestown, he is unable to stop the Broken Moth, who murders entire families, only leaving the youngest child alive in attempts to meet the Eldest One. Hal Moore gains the ability known as the Shattered Butterfly after being attacked by the Broken Moth. With the Shattered Butterfly, he enters the minds of survivors, who are in a coma like state after meeting with the Broken Moth in an attempt to find out who is responsible for the murders
Michelle Moore
The wife of Hal Moore. She was once happily married to him, until their daughter died when she drowned. After she died, she blamed Hal for it, and was very hateful towards him. She didn’t want to divorce him, as she only kept him for his money to fuel her drinking habit, that she had gained to help ease her depression from their daughter’s death. She hasn’t spoken to him since the day of their daughter’s death.
Albert Moore
The adopted son of Hal and Michelle. He was once a quiet but friendly boy, until he nearly died and his sister died. After this, his personality didn’t seem to change much. He was still soft spoken and polite. However, his interactions with others was entirely different. He would beat up other students, sometimes no different from how one would when attempting to murder a man. He was also cruel to animals, beating the local dogs and cats and crushing butterflies with every chance he had. This is probably his own way to express anger and depression over his sister’s death
Alissa
The first victim of the Broken Moth. After her parents were murdered in front of her, she was put into a traumatic state, where she would attempt to kill herself with any object, which is why she was restrained in a hospital to keep her from doing so. Hal used his Shattered Butterfly ability to look inside her, to see that her mind was like that of a hospital, filled with figures of deformed creatures in hospital uniforms and mounds of flesh stuck in wheelchairs. After managing to ease the pain within her, Hal asked Alissa what the Broken Moth was like. She said that his appearance was hard to make out, but he was very manipulative, speaking with survivors as if he was a psychologist, and believed that suicide was the only cure for their depression.
Broken Moth
A mysterious individual whose name, appearance, and personality are unknown. What is known is that when he murders a group of people, he always leaves the youngest one, usually a child or teen, alive, and speaks with them in a calm and soothing voice, telling them that their only cure for depression is to end their own lives
The Eldest One
A creature from another world that is said to only come to one who is pure evil at heart and willing to commit crimes that are too much for even a human to commit, and that one person must not be a human if they are willing to do such evil acts. He is said that his presence could bring the end of the world, starting from the mind of the one who brought him, and controlling his body from within, making him the last thing to walk the earth, as that is the goal of the Eldest One. To be the last thing to walk the earth.
A detective by the name of Hal Moore suffers from mental depression and thoughts of suicide. After the death of his daughter, where he chose to save his drowning adopted son in hopes of trying to save them both, his son, Andrew, has been quiet and developed a sense of cruelty, assaulting and threatening other children and harming animals. His wife, Michelle, has grown to hate Hal after their daughter’s death, blaming him for not saving her and has become an alcoholic and started cheating on him. Though Hal does believe this, he still does what he can to help others. This has lead him to be a part of a case of bizarre murders that occur in Jamestown, a small mountain town that was once peaceful before the murders. Groups of families are found murdered, yet only one of them, a small child, remains alive after each murder, with a pair of moth wings next to them. When Hal is looking into the case, he is attacked by the killer, who has earned the nickname of Broken Moth, for leaving moth wings at the scene of the crime. After surviving the attack, Hal awakes to find that he has the ability to enter the minds of the survivors of Broken Moth’s murders, this power being known as the Shattered Butterfly. The Shattered Butterfly lets him see that the survivors minds have been tainted with dark thoughts by the Broken Moth, in an attempt for him to meet the Eldest One, a creature that only comes to one who commits such horrible acts on another human and are pure evil. Hal uses the Shattered Butterfly to do what he can to stop the Broken Moth from meeting the Eldest One, a creature believed to bring forth an age of darkness.
~Characters~
Hal Moore
A detective in the Jamestown police department, who suffers from depression after his daughter's death when he saved his son first. Her death badly affected his marriage and his life, making him more cold and cruel to those around him, not even cracking a single smile. He uses this to try and help those avoid the same fate. Although he tries to prevent more loss in Jamestown, he is unable to stop the Broken Moth, who murders entire families, only leaving the youngest child alive in attempts to meet the Eldest One. Hal Moore gains the ability known as the Shattered Butterfly after being attacked by the Broken Moth. With the Shattered Butterfly, he enters the minds of survivors, who are in a coma like state after meeting with the Broken Moth in an attempt to find out who is responsible for the murders
Michelle Moore
The wife of Hal Moore. She was once happily married to him, until their daughter died when she drowned. After she died, she blamed Hal for it, and was very hateful towards him. She didn’t want to divorce him, as she only kept him for his money to fuel her drinking habit, that she had gained to help ease her depression from their daughter’s death. She hasn’t spoken to him since the day of their daughter’s death.
Albert Moore
The adopted son of Hal and Michelle. He was once a quiet but friendly boy, until he nearly died and his sister died. After this, his personality didn’t seem to change much. He was still soft spoken and polite. However, his interactions with others was entirely different. He would beat up other students, sometimes no different from how one would when attempting to murder a man. He was also cruel to animals, beating the local dogs and cats and crushing butterflies with every chance he had. This is probably his own way to express anger and depression over his sister’s death
Alissa
The first victim of the Broken Moth. After her parents were murdered in front of her, she was put into a traumatic state, where she would attempt to kill herself with any object, which is why she was restrained in a hospital to keep her from doing so. Hal used his Shattered Butterfly ability to look inside her, to see that her mind was like that of a hospital, filled with figures of deformed creatures in hospital uniforms and mounds of flesh stuck in wheelchairs. After managing to ease the pain within her, Hal asked Alissa what the Broken Moth was like. She said that his appearance was hard to make out, but he was very manipulative, speaking with survivors as if he was a psychologist, and believed that suicide was the only cure for their depression.
Broken Moth
A mysterious individual whose name, appearance, and personality are unknown. What is known is that when he murders a group of people, he always leaves the youngest one, usually a child or teen, alive, and speaks with them in a calm and soothing voice, telling them that their only cure for depression is to end their own lives
The Eldest One
A creature from another world that is said to only come to one who is pure evil at heart and willing to commit crimes that are too much for even a human to commit, and that one person must not be a human if they are willing to do such evil acts. He is said that his presence could bring the end of the world, starting from the mind of the one who brought him, and controlling his body from within, making him the last thing to walk the earth, as that is the goal of the Eldest One. To be the last thing to walk the earth.
What in the name of god. They are already ready remaking Grand Theft Auto 5.
Now, don't get me wrong. I love Grand Theft Auto 5. I think it is one of the funnest games I have played in 2013. But, seriously, it's only one year old, and already they are remaking it for Playstation 4 and XBox One. Seriously, you should at least give a game some time to age before you remake it. Look at Ocarina of Time, a game which people said is the greatest game ever, which was made back in 1999. The remake for the 3DS wasn't made until 2012, which is years later. Honestly, they are already remaking GTA 5. Sure, the graphics are better, but the thing is that the graphics were amazing to begin with. Why are you remaking this game so early, Rockstar. But, hey, that's only my opinion. What's Your Take
Now, don't get me wrong. I love Grand Theft Auto 5. I think it is one of the funnest games I have played in 2013. But, seriously, it's only one year old, and already they are remaking it for Playstation 4 and XBox One. Seriously, you should at least give a game some time to age before you remake it. Look at Ocarina of Time, a game which people said is the greatest game ever, which was made back in 1999. The remake for the 3DS wasn't made until 2012, which is years later. Honestly, they are already remaking GTA 5. Sure, the graphics are better, but the thing is that the graphics were amazing to begin with. Why are you remaking this game so early, Rockstar. But, hey, that's only my opinion. What's Your Take
*ding dong*
???: what is it?
Henry: hello Simon
Simon: Henry! you still wearing that tux?
Henry: every chance I get
Simon: heh... oh... you brought soldiers
Dex: why does everyone think i'm a soldier?
Marcus: no idea...
Henry: you seem calmer since the last time a saw you...
Simon: I take pills... anyway, why are you here?
Henry: we need you back
Simon: no way! i'm NOT going back to Klintsy!
Henry: we are close to taking down Harper and Dominic.
Simon: why don't fight your own war!
Henry: you are the only one that knows Harper and his tactics.
Simon: ok then, come inside so I can teach you
Henry: you and I both know that he still has some sanity left...
Simon: ... *sigh* lets go...
???: what is it?
Henry: hello Simon
Simon: Henry! you still wearing that tux?
Henry: every chance I get
Simon: heh... oh... you brought soldiers
Dex: why does everyone think i'm a soldier?
Marcus: no idea...
Henry: you seem calmer since the last time a saw you...
Simon: I take pills... anyway, why are you here?
Henry: we need you back
Simon: no way! i'm NOT going back to Klintsy!
Henry: we are close to taking down Harper and Dominic.
Simon: why don't fight your own war!
Henry: you are the only one that knows Harper and his tactics.
Simon: ok then, come inside so I can teach you
Henry: you and I both know that he still has some sanity left...
Simon: ... *sigh* lets go...