For those of you that own a Playstation, I'm sure you know of the PS mascot Klonoa. It is an amazing franchise. However, there is a fanfic that is so poorly written, I think it is right up there on bad Creepypastas such as The Kill Waker and Jeff the Killer. That fanfic is Klonoa's Darker Side.
So, it starts with the main character giving the game to his friend to borrow. Soon after, he gets the game back. However, there is one problem with the Klonoa game. It has been cursed. Guess how this happened........ His best friend cursed the game. How? I don't fucking know. The story never explains this. So, after the main character plays the game, he then gets followed by an evil Klonoa. This is the stories biggest problem. NO ONE SEE'S THE EVIL KLONOA. Literally, no one. Everyone is completely oblivious to it, like "Hey look, its an evil Klonoa...... Anyway, did you see the new episode of Adventure Time".
And then, the main characters brother plays the cursed Klonoa game, and then Klonoa drags his brother into the TV. When the main character sees this, he smashes the TV.... And he didn't even think about saving his brother. Oh boy, we got an idiot as the main character. Whoop a dee fucking doo.
So, the main character decides to destroy the game with a hammer, a buzzsaw, and even trying to run it over. And, no, bending it was not the first thing he thought of. He never thought about it actually. Yeah, he is THAT stupid. So, he then tosses the game in the dumpster and guess what, that actually works..... You got to be kidding me. Is the evil Klonoa's weakness garbage or something. Sis he just give up because the game got a little garbage on it. Oh fuck it.
And that was a fucking disaster. It is one of the most poorly written piece's of shit in the world...... But, hey, that's only my opinion. What's Your Take
So, it starts with the main character giving the game to his friend to borrow. Soon after, he gets the game back. However, there is one problem with the Klonoa game. It has been cursed. Guess how this happened........ His best friend cursed the game. How? I don't fucking know. The story never explains this. So, after the main character plays the game, he then gets followed by an evil Klonoa. This is the stories biggest problem. NO ONE SEE'S THE EVIL KLONOA. Literally, no one. Everyone is completely oblivious to it, like "Hey look, its an evil Klonoa...... Anyway, did you see the new episode of Adventure Time".
And then, the main characters brother plays the cursed Klonoa game, and then Klonoa drags his brother into the TV. When the main character sees this, he smashes the TV.... And he didn't even think about saving his brother. Oh boy, we got an idiot as the main character. Whoop a dee fucking doo.
So, the main character decides to destroy the game with a hammer, a buzzsaw, and even trying to run it over. And, no, bending it was not the first thing he thought of. He never thought about it actually. Yeah, he is THAT stupid. So, he then tosses the game in the dumpster and guess what, that actually works..... You got to be kidding me. Is the evil Klonoa's weakness garbage or something. Sis he just give up because the game got a little garbage on it. Oh fuck it.
And that was a fucking disaster. It is one of the most poorly written piece's of shit in the world...... But, hey, that's only my opinion. What's Your Take