OMG THAT WAS LIKE WOW

Wow that was brilliant
are you going to write more?

i cant wait

W-o-W!!

that was really good, i think that you have heaps of talent and potential and if you get the book published ill buy it - so keep at it! :D

You spelled creak wrong. The one you used was like a river. You meant creak. it ruined the whole story. lol. you know im just kidding. the story is great so far.

That. Was. AWESOME!

omg i luv twilight!! this book is so freakin awesome!!! lol... u really jumped into it fast though... oh well keep up the good work... ill def buy it if it comes out!!!! luv ya babe!!1

hey alice i luv your "book" thinking about the cover and picture for the chapters having drawing blocks desperate for ideas!!

I LOVE IT :D

I LOVE ITT:D...if youu get it published I will definitly buy it...how old r u.?

that is so freaking awesome!!!!!! cant wait.

That was really good, did you use renee's name from Twilight? lol
You are a really good writer, keep it up!

Happy Beladed Birthday, alicecullenx95! Great story! Loved it

OMGSH! its so good(:

i think im going to be buying your book!

I know what happens next! The writer, alicecullenx95 told me over the phone and it will be great! P.S. I am the official editor for it!

what do you mean next chapter maybe ??? i want to know what happens next !!! :D

If you happen to be as famous as Stephanie Meyer one day, I'll totally be your biggest fan.

oh my edward... that was totally.... words cant even describe it!!!!!! it was really good! im totally buying it when it comes out =] hehe. good job!! keep writing!

good job you have tons of talent and i like your style of writing

That was really good...you could remove it but them we wouldent be able to find out what hppen next...keep it up!

I love your story but you seem to go really fast you need to take your time and discribe things more because it just goes from one thing to another you need to maybe provide more info about your vamps but keep it up because that was really good you have a natrual talent it seems like.