heyy here's my new fanfic it doesn't have a name yet so if you have any ideas let me know please.
Chapter 1.
'Bella, oh Bella. My sweet baby sister.' I heard in my head. "Lily?" I asked out loud. 'Shh. You can only here me in your head. I'm coming don't worry. We'll be together again.' She said before fading out of my head. "Bella who are you talking to? Who's Lily?" Edward asked waking me up. I was alseep? Okay it was just a dream. "Oh, just a dream."
It's been 10 years today that I haven't seen Lily. She had gone missing right from her bedroom. I was 9 and she was 16. So long ago. Too long. I missed her dearly. I never told Edward about Lily. Jake never mentions her because he loved her like an older sister. The truth is we both miss her.
Edward repeated again. "Bella? Who's Lily? I bursted out crying. "My-my sister." I said. "Oh. Bella. I'm so sorry. What happened?" I looked up at him. "I was 9 and she was 16. We were playing and I said I was hungry she made me a snack while we waited for our parents to come home. I heard her cell phone ring and she ran upstairs. I remember sitting there for a half hour waiting for her. She never came back down. When I went upstairs to her room the window was smashed. I couldn't remember my parents phone number so I called 9-1-1. I told them my sister was watching me and she's no where to be found. I remember crying when my parents came home to the police in their house. 10 years today she's been missing. And I-I miss her!" I started to sob.
Edward craddled me in his arms. "Then the worst part is I have a dream about her!" Edward rocked us back and forth. "It's okay. She's in a better place." Edward comforted me.
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I know this is really short but I want to know what you think so I know wiether or not to continue this story.
Chapter 1.
'Bella, oh Bella. My sweet baby sister.' I heard in my head. "Lily?" I asked out loud. 'Shh. You can only here me in your head. I'm coming don't worry. We'll be together again.' She said before fading out of my head. "Bella who are you talking to? Who's Lily?" Edward asked waking me up. I was alseep? Okay it was just a dream. "Oh, just a dream."
It's been 10 years today that I haven't seen Lily. She had gone missing right from her bedroom. I was 9 and she was 16. So long ago. Too long. I missed her dearly. I never told Edward about Lily. Jake never mentions her because he loved her like an older sister. The truth is we both miss her.
Edward repeated again. "Bella? Who's Lily? I bursted out crying. "My-my sister." I said. "Oh. Bella. I'm so sorry. What happened?" I looked up at him. "I was 9 and she was 16. We were playing and I said I was hungry she made me a snack while we waited for our parents to come home. I heard her cell phone ring and she ran upstairs. I remember sitting there for a half hour waiting for her. She never came back down. When I went upstairs to her room the window was smashed. I couldn't remember my parents phone number so I called 9-1-1. I told them my sister was watching me and she's no where to be found. I remember crying when my parents came home to the police in their house. 10 years today she's been missing. And I-I miss her!" I started to sob.
Edward craddled me in his arms. "Then the worst part is I have a dream about her!" Edward rocked us back and forth. "It's okay. She's in a better place." Edward comforted me.
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I know this is really short but I want to know what you think so I know wiether or not to continue this story.
"When we were five, they asked us what we wanted to be when we grew up. Our answers were things like astronaut, president, or in my case… princess.
When we were ten, they asked again and we answered - rock star, cowboy, or in my case, gold medalist. But now that we've grown up, they want a serious answer. Well, how 'bout this: who the hell knows?!
This isn't the time to make hard and fast decisions, its time to make mistakes. Take the wrong train and get stuck somewhere chill. Fall in love - a lot. Major in philosophy 'cause there's no way to make a career out of that. Change your mind. Then change it again, because nothing is permanent.
So make as many mistakes as you can. That way, someday, when they ask again what we want to be… we won't have to guess. We'll know."
When we were ten, they asked again and we answered - rock star, cowboy, or in my case, gold medalist. But now that we've grown up, they want a serious answer. Well, how 'bout this: who the hell knows?!
This isn't the time to make hard and fast decisions, its time to make mistakes. Take the wrong train and get stuck somewhere chill. Fall in love - a lot. Major in philosophy 'cause there's no way to make a career out of that. Change your mind. Then change it again, because nothing is permanent.
So make as many mistakes as you can. That way, someday, when they ask again what we want to be… we won't have to guess. We'll know."