We've been trudging through Waterless Desert for hours.I check my map.
"We're here, right?" Radioactive says, pointing to a section on the map a few inches away from a vast forest.
"Yeah, we are," I say.
Aimina groans.
"Oh, I'm sorry, art thou not entertained?" I say, annoyed.
"Sorry, it's just so hot out here," Aimina complains. Her wolf nanny... thing... whines.
"Not my fault."
"Look, I know it's not your fault, but do you have any water?"
I look ahead. I can't believe my eyes. "Radioactive? do me a favor and punch me across the face."
Radioactive does so.
"I sh** you not, that's actually what you think it is," my brain tells me.
"An oasis!" I exclaim.
"It is!" Dakota says.
All of a sudden, it's like Sonic Boom as we sprint towards it as fast as we can.
I then do the most embarrassing thing imaginable: I trip over a rock and land in the water. "Well -- that was a shorter distance than I expected."
Everyone else gets in, and we're drinking up that water like we're dogs.
I check my soggy map. According to it, we're just a mile away from the forest we're headed to. I look up. I can see a large group of trees, a wooden hedge spanning thousands of miles left and right.
I get out and put the map in my backpack. "OK, swimming class is out, guys. We need to find Lenox, and fast."
"Who's Lenox?" Aimina asks, getting out.
"A vampire. it's night right now, obviously, so it's likely she's out getting takeout."
"Vampires don't go to restaurants," Sonic points out.
"No crap, Sherlock. I meant she's probably out getting some blood from animals in that forest." I jab my thumb in that direction.
"Oh."
We start heading to the forest.
An hour later...
I watch Lenox tear an animal's throat out with her bare teeth behind a tree. Vampires have always impressed me.
I adjust my feet, and end up stepping on a twig.
Sound really carries in Giant-A** Forest.
I immediately stand straight and press my back against the tree. My heart's pounding as I hear Lenox's footsteps get closer.
She looks at me.
"Um... Hi?" I try.
"Wyldfyre, what are you doing here?" Lenox crosses her arms.
"Look, I - I just need some help. Once we destroy Darkfyre, I'll be out of your hair."
"Fine."
"Wait, what? You're just gonna join us that quickly?" This is shady. The Lenox I remember wouldn't join that quickly.
"I care about this world."
"Says the one who leaves dead animal carcasses where they are after ripping their throats out..."
"Silence!" Lenox bares her teeth and hisses.
"Sorry!"
Lenox goes to find the others.
I get to them before her. "Guys, Lenox is just joining us, without asking why!"
"Maybe it's 'cause your her friend?"
It's not that, I can read people, and that is not the reason! Am I the only one who finds this shady?"
No one agrees.
"Anybody? Oh, come on, somebody be my moral compass here."
"Hurry up!" Lenox says from about 35 feet away.
"Right." We follow her.
Next chapter...
The Flamearang
"We're here, right?" Radioactive says, pointing to a section on the map a few inches away from a vast forest.
"Yeah, we are," I say.
Aimina groans.
"Oh, I'm sorry, art thou not entertained?" I say, annoyed.
"Sorry, it's just so hot out here," Aimina complains. Her wolf nanny... thing... whines.
"Not my fault."
"Look, I know it's not your fault, but do you have any water?"
I look ahead. I can't believe my eyes. "Radioactive? do me a favor and punch me across the face."
Radioactive does so.
"I sh** you not, that's actually what you think it is," my brain tells me.
"An oasis!" I exclaim.
"It is!" Dakota says.
All of a sudden, it's like Sonic Boom as we sprint towards it as fast as we can.
I then do the most embarrassing thing imaginable: I trip over a rock and land in the water. "Well -- that was a shorter distance than I expected."
Everyone else gets in, and we're drinking up that water like we're dogs.
I check my soggy map. According to it, we're just a mile away from the forest we're headed to. I look up. I can see a large group of trees, a wooden hedge spanning thousands of miles left and right.
I get out and put the map in my backpack. "OK, swimming class is out, guys. We need to find Lenox, and fast."
"Who's Lenox?" Aimina asks, getting out.
"A vampire. it's night right now, obviously, so it's likely she's out getting takeout."
"Vampires don't go to restaurants," Sonic points out.
"No crap, Sherlock. I meant she's probably out getting some blood from animals in that forest." I jab my thumb in that direction.
"Oh."
We start heading to the forest.
An hour later...
I watch Lenox tear an animal's throat out with her bare teeth behind a tree. Vampires have always impressed me.
I adjust my feet, and end up stepping on a twig.
Sound really carries in Giant-A** Forest.
I immediately stand straight and press my back against the tree. My heart's pounding as I hear Lenox's footsteps get closer.
She looks at me.
"Um... Hi?" I try.
"Wyldfyre, what are you doing here?" Lenox crosses her arms.
"Look, I - I just need some help. Once we destroy Darkfyre, I'll be out of your hair."
"Fine."
"Wait, what? You're just gonna join us that quickly?" This is shady. The Lenox I remember wouldn't join that quickly.
"I care about this world."
"Says the one who leaves dead animal carcasses where they are after ripping their throats out..."
"Silence!" Lenox bares her teeth and hisses.
"Sorry!"
Lenox goes to find the others.
I get to them before her. "Guys, Lenox is just joining us, without asking why!"
"Maybe it's 'cause your her friend?"
It's not that, I can read people, and that is not the reason! Am I the only one who finds this shady?"
No one agrees.
"Anybody? Oh, come on, somebody be my moral compass here."
"Hurry up!" Lenox says from about 35 feet away.
"Right." We follow her.
Next chapter...
The Flamearang
I got my time to sit down and do this today! Even though I said tomorrow. For Rachel.
Gender: male
Name:Cooper (His agent name is Jenkins)
Age 20 turning 21 soon
Height 3.3
Weight: I'm not very good with weight so a healthy weight good for acrobatics ( for 20 year olds)
Powers: Can slow time but not for long. He can use chaos and that let's him do it longer but he doesn't know that.
Weapons he carries a sniper on his back
Abilities. Really good acrobat and using his sniper.
Species: Wolf
Appearance: his eyes are green, his hair is messy but doesn't go down (not like sonic's) including wolf like ears and two
black stripes over his cheek. Brown fur. He wears no clothes. (Only hanging his sniper over is right shoulder) he is a left handed person
But he has a furry chest that's quit similar to his fur colour but a whiter. Wears shadow like shoes just re coloured (your choice)
If it's not enough I'll write a backstory and tell me what I missed out.
Gender: male
Name:Cooper (His agent name is Jenkins)
Age 20 turning 21 soon
Height 3.3
Weight: I'm not very good with weight so a healthy weight good for acrobatics ( for 20 year olds)
Powers: Can slow time but not for long. He can use chaos and that let's him do it longer but he doesn't know that.
Weapons he carries a sniper on his back
Abilities. Really good acrobat and using his sniper.
Species: Wolf
Appearance: his eyes are green, his hair is messy but doesn't go down (not like sonic's) including wolf like ears and two
black stripes over his cheek. Brown fur. He wears no clothes. (Only hanging his sniper over is right shoulder) he is a left handed person
But he has a furry chest that's quit similar to his fur colour but a whiter. Wears shadow like shoes just re coloured (your choice)
If it's not enough I'll write a backstory and tell me what I missed out.
So why am I remaking it? Well the series was the first fanfiction series I made and when I did it wasn’t really well written, plotholes galore, so I wanted to remake it completely. But at the same time I didn’t want to redo it because of all the ideas I had.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.