I had quite a bit of help from Evolia-Wulf on this, so i gotta give her a TON of credit! Rachel's had a lot of critics in the past about her being "Mary-sueish" so Evolia-wulf and i worked together, brainstormed (and brainhurricaned XD Evolia would be the only one to get this joke), put our ideas together, and came up with an AWSOME storyline that i think EVERYONE will agree, is A LOT better than her last! so here it is! Enjoy!
Personality:
Rachel is very timid and shy. she often lacks self confidence in herself, leading her to battles that are made more difficult than they really need to be for her. Rachel is very kind hearted, despite being shy, but she can get herself into a mess where her help is either not wanted, or not needed, giving others an impression of a pushy side to Rachel that ultimately doesn't exist. She has been very dependant on her sister in her early years, and it took her a long time to adapt when she had to travel her own path.
How Things Got Started:
Rachel and her sister Ashley were like any other ordinary human siblings. they would spend countless hours just talking some nights. but one day, everything changed. Ashley just started isolating herself. she spent very little time in and around the house, and the times she was there, she would be in her room, alone. Rachel never understood why. she often wondered if it was something about her, or who she'd become? she wouldn't get her answer until much later.
Things took another turn for the worst when a lightning bolt struck their house and caught it ablaze. Ashley made sure Rachel got out through the bedroom window, but their parents, unfortunatly, never made it. Rachel and Ashley were forced from then on to look out for eachother. Ahley, being the oldest at 15, had to take a more authorative figure over Rachel, who was merily 10. Rachel never seemed to have a problem with following orders though. she rarely ever even spoke, she would just follow Ashley around wherever she went and say nothing more than a few words in a scentence to answer one of Ashley's questions. She would never speak to anyone else though.
A while after traveling rogue, Rachel soon discovered why Ashley had always kept to herself. they ran into her boyfriend, whom no one knew she had. Apparantly, he had told Ashley his name was Daryk. he had been teaching Ashley to harness her own powers, which is why she never hung around with anyone. she wanted to keep it a secret. they found out though, that Daryk, was really someone named Kyrad, and he wanted Ashley's power to rule the Multiverse.
After refusing to help him and breaking up with him, Ashley began to teach Rachel to use her powers. after a few months of training, Rachel discovered that she had her own Fairy transformation and special powers. her attribute combination of mainly Lightning with a side effect of Light, had made her power Golden Lightning.
Soon after rachel was strong enough (and old enough, by the age of 14) they began traveling across the Multiverse, hunting down Kyrad. when they finally found him, they discovered that there was another minion behind it as well. someone named Argon appeared to be like his partner. so now, rachel and Ashley have two people to chase and kill. before its too late.
a year after that, they figured out that Argon and Kyrad had split up, and there was no way the two of them could BOTH be in two places at once, so they made the painful descision to split up and go seperate ways. Ashley gave Rachel a Cassie Stone, allowing her to travel accross time and demensions with a little boost from her Light magic.
It took rachel several months to adapt to being alone, and she didn't until she met a race of beings who seemed to be very closly associated with water. they had asked her to find a substance known as Neptune's Fruit, and return it to them as soon as possible. Rachel went along with it, having taken helping different races of the Multiverse in her daily stride. when she got the fruit and took it back to their hideout, she overheard their true evil plan. they had planned to use the fruit to make a vicious mer-folk race to go around and infect the seas of the Multiverse. Rachel knew she couldn't let anyone get their hands on the fruit, because of its power. the only way to make sure of that, was to eat it. She knew if she did, she would be risking turning herself into a monster, but is she didnt, she could be risking turning the WHOLE MULTIVERSE into monsters. So she gathered up her courage, pushed aside her shyness and doubt...and ate the fruit...
Surprisingly enough, the fruit hadn't turned her into a monster. she was forced to escape the hideout through the underwater passageway, where she discovered that her Light magic has cleansed the fruit as she ate it, making her the first, and one of the only, of the good mer-people.
after this, she found herself traveling to Sonic's World, meeting him when he saved her from Dr.Eggman's Roboticizer. they became instant friends, and he helped rachel to regain some of her happy/outgoing personality she lost when her parents died. She got along well with all of his friends, for the most part. Shadow was a mystery to her, but he befriended her despite their personality difference.
it wasnt long before she had to say good-bye even to this world, as the chase of Argon and the Battle for the Multiverse waited for no friendship. she eventually found herself on a planet called Veresha. she met another hedgehog here, this time by the name of Splice Tansec. she had several casual encounters with him before realizing the horrible truth. he was being enslaved by someone named Penelopee. furious and outraged, she challenged Penelopee to a duel, the winner would gain ownership over Splice. Being the rules of the planet, she was forced to accept. it was a needlessly long battle, due to rachel's lack of self-confidence, but she eventually wore Penelopee down and reigned victorious.
Once she got ahold of the document that kept Splice enslaved, she used the heat from her Lightning to burn the paper, freeing him forever. Splice felt forever in her debt, so he agreed to join her on her journeys, though until rachel helped him to discover his powers and true link to the Crescent Moon, he wasn't much help to her.
After Rachel Morally Supported Splice in the take-down of his Father, the one responsible for selling him to slavary and sabotaging his own tribe for over 17 years, Rachel and Splice's friendship blossomed into a pure and noble Love, which they take with them as they travel throughout the Multiverse together.
Where is She Now?
Now rachel and Splice Travel the Multiverse in hopes that one day, they'll be able to defeat Argon once and for all, and join up with Ashley for the finaly battle against Argon. what will happen when he's defeated? rachel often wonders. her whole purpose in life was chasing and battling them, when that's over, she wonders if there will ever be a point in living? but she has found temporary relief with Splice and his undying love for her, and the love she returns to him.
Personality:
Rachel is very timid and shy. she often lacks self confidence in herself, leading her to battles that are made more difficult than they really need to be for her. Rachel is very kind hearted, despite being shy, but she can get herself into a mess where her help is either not wanted, or not needed, giving others an impression of a pushy side to Rachel that ultimately doesn't exist. She has been very dependant on her sister in her early years, and it took her a long time to adapt when she had to travel her own path.
How Things Got Started:
Rachel and her sister Ashley were like any other ordinary human siblings. they would spend countless hours just talking some nights. but one day, everything changed. Ashley just started isolating herself. she spent very little time in and around the house, and the times she was there, she would be in her room, alone. Rachel never understood why. she often wondered if it was something about her, or who she'd become? she wouldn't get her answer until much later.
Things took another turn for the worst when a lightning bolt struck their house and caught it ablaze. Ashley made sure Rachel got out through the bedroom window, but their parents, unfortunatly, never made it. Rachel and Ashley were forced from then on to look out for eachother. Ahley, being the oldest at 15, had to take a more authorative figure over Rachel, who was merily 10. Rachel never seemed to have a problem with following orders though. she rarely ever even spoke, she would just follow Ashley around wherever she went and say nothing more than a few words in a scentence to answer one of Ashley's questions. She would never speak to anyone else though.
A while after traveling rogue, Rachel soon discovered why Ashley had always kept to herself. they ran into her boyfriend, whom no one knew she had. Apparantly, he had told Ashley his name was Daryk. he had been teaching Ashley to harness her own powers, which is why she never hung around with anyone. she wanted to keep it a secret. they found out though, that Daryk, was really someone named Kyrad, and he wanted Ashley's power to rule the Multiverse.
After refusing to help him and breaking up with him, Ashley began to teach Rachel to use her powers. after a few months of training, Rachel discovered that she had her own Fairy transformation and special powers. her attribute combination of mainly Lightning with a side effect of Light, had made her power Golden Lightning.
Soon after rachel was strong enough (and old enough, by the age of 14) they began traveling across the Multiverse, hunting down Kyrad. when they finally found him, they discovered that there was another minion behind it as well. someone named Argon appeared to be like his partner. so now, rachel and Ashley have two people to chase and kill. before its too late.
a year after that, they figured out that Argon and Kyrad had split up, and there was no way the two of them could BOTH be in two places at once, so they made the painful descision to split up and go seperate ways. Ashley gave Rachel a Cassie Stone, allowing her to travel accross time and demensions with a little boost from her Light magic.
It took rachel several months to adapt to being alone, and she didn't until she met a race of beings who seemed to be very closly associated with water. they had asked her to find a substance known as Neptune's Fruit, and return it to them as soon as possible. Rachel went along with it, having taken helping different races of the Multiverse in her daily stride. when she got the fruit and took it back to their hideout, she overheard their true evil plan. they had planned to use the fruit to make a vicious mer-folk race to go around and infect the seas of the Multiverse. Rachel knew she couldn't let anyone get their hands on the fruit, because of its power. the only way to make sure of that, was to eat it. She knew if she did, she would be risking turning herself into a monster, but is she didnt, she could be risking turning the WHOLE MULTIVERSE into monsters. So she gathered up her courage, pushed aside her shyness and doubt...and ate the fruit...
Surprisingly enough, the fruit hadn't turned her into a monster. she was forced to escape the hideout through the underwater passageway, where she discovered that her Light magic has cleansed the fruit as she ate it, making her the first, and one of the only, of the good mer-people.
after this, she found herself traveling to Sonic's World, meeting him when he saved her from Dr.Eggman's Roboticizer. they became instant friends, and he helped rachel to regain some of her happy/outgoing personality she lost when her parents died. She got along well with all of his friends, for the most part. Shadow was a mystery to her, but he befriended her despite their personality difference.
it wasnt long before she had to say good-bye even to this world, as the chase of Argon and the Battle for the Multiverse waited for no friendship. she eventually found herself on a planet called Veresha. she met another hedgehog here, this time by the name of Splice Tansec. she had several casual encounters with him before realizing the horrible truth. he was being enslaved by someone named Penelopee. furious and outraged, she challenged Penelopee to a duel, the winner would gain ownership over Splice. Being the rules of the planet, she was forced to accept. it was a needlessly long battle, due to rachel's lack of self-confidence, but she eventually wore Penelopee down and reigned victorious.
Once she got ahold of the document that kept Splice enslaved, she used the heat from her Lightning to burn the paper, freeing him forever. Splice felt forever in her debt, so he agreed to join her on her journeys, though until rachel helped him to discover his powers and true link to the Crescent Moon, he wasn't much help to her.
After Rachel Morally Supported Splice in the take-down of his Father, the one responsible for selling him to slavary and sabotaging his own tribe for over 17 years, Rachel and Splice's friendship blossomed into a pure and noble Love, which they take with them as they travel throughout the Multiverse together.
Where is She Now?
Now rachel and Splice Travel the Multiverse in hopes that one day, they'll be able to defeat Argon once and for all, and join up with Ashley for the finaly battle against Argon. what will happen when he's defeated? rachel often wonders. her whole purpose in life was chasing and battling them, when that's over, she wonders if there will ever be a point in living? but she has found temporary relief with Splice and his undying love for her, and the love she returns to him.
slick's full attire
gold desert eagle(side arm)
commando assault rifle(primary)
intervention(sniper)
uzi(secondary)
wears(his shirt but with longer sleeves and his pants have 2 ammo holds on each side 4 each gun.and a grey long scarf)
regular combat knife just the handle has his name on it
his military vehicle(a regular military humvee)
his regular person car(a red middle striped car with the left side black and the right side white.the middle of the front hood has his logo)
climbing boots
gloves(grey)
a special red edges sword
mystacal powers:
dark power
chaos shot,chaos blast(only when enraged)chaos control(only with a chaos emerald)
fire powers(only when 1 of his friends r hurt and the 1 that hurt the friend tries to burn him)
gold desert eagle(side arm)
commando assault rifle(primary)
intervention(sniper)
uzi(secondary)
wears(his shirt but with longer sleeves and his pants have 2 ammo holds on each side 4 each gun.and a grey long scarf)
regular combat knife just the handle has his name on it
his military vehicle(a regular military humvee)
his regular person car(a red middle striped car with the left side black and the right side white.the middle of the front hood has his logo)
climbing boots
gloves(grey)
a special red edges sword
mystacal powers:
dark power
chaos shot,chaos blast(only when enraged)chaos control(only with a chaos emerald)
fire powers(only when 1 of his friends r hurt and the 1 that hurt the friend tries to burn him)
Shade:*laying on the ground:What have you done to me......
Soldier:I posioned you
Shade:* makes antidote and drinks it then punchs the soldier*
Soldier:ARGH!!!*Radio* bring extra soldiers this guy is an maniac*
Soldier: *kicks shade down and kicks him*
???:*Blasts the soldier* Looks like you need an hand
Shade: i do yes
Soldier Boss: Elimate the Intruders!!!
Soldiers: Yes sir
Soldiers charge at Shade and ???
Shade: *gets up* What to do now?
???: Run?
Shade: Okay lets get the hell out of here
Shade: Woah that was an close one
???: I know
Shade: What is your name?
Alcase: my name is Alcase
Alcase: whats yours?
Shade: Mine is Shade
narrator: Who is this mysterious character
But more importunately Where is shade?
More on the next part of The Chronicles of Xatron
Shade2145: Stay tuned!
Soldier:I posioned you
Shade:* makes antidote and drinks it then punchs the soldier*
Soldier:ARGH!!!*Radio* bring extra soldiers this guy is an maniac*
Soldier: *kicks shade down and kicks him*
???:*Blasts the soldier* Looks like you need an hand
Shade: i do yes
Soldier Boss: Elimate the Intruders!!!
Soldiers: Yes sir
Soldiers charge at Shade and ???
Shade: *gets up* What to do now?
???: Run?
Shade: Okay lets get the hell out of here
Shade: Woah that was an close one
???: I know
Shade: What is your name?
Alcase: my name is Alcase
Alcase: whats yours?
Shade: Mine is Shade
narrator: Who is this mysterious character
But more importunately Where is shade?
More on the next part of The Chronicles of Xatron
Shade2145: Stay tuned!