OKAY, this is just an idea for a oneshot I've been toying with. I dunno... I jotted this down in about 30 seconds, and I want to know reader's opinions. Should I go for it, or just leave it in the dust? Be honest with me here.
Now listen to this --> link It provokes growing insanity! Huzzah! Rah, rah, and all that shit...
Enjoy this peice of shit. In the full version, I will probably put more graphic descriptions of how people die. I decided I need to be more creative in my character deaths. Stabbing, explosions, and guns only get you so far.
Heh... The comments are longer than the snippet. I find that sad. And stupid. I think I shall go jump off the roof now. Goodbye.
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Another news report stating another murder.
“The killer was not seen. There were no survivors, and no explanation for the rampage.”
They’d been going all week. To most citizens, it was horrifying- the gore, the blood, and the way that all matter of people- weak, strong, young, old, even just babies- had their bodies disgraced in such a manner- no person deserved to die that way.
To one, a lean, black and white wolf, it was just boring. He wanted to hear real news. His name was Seth, and he was the killer.
“Crime experts say there is little to no chance of the killer turning themselves in.”
“I would if they just said ‘please.’” Seth snorted, turning off the TV.
Now listen to this --> link It provokes growing insanity! Huzzah! Rah, rah, and all that shit...
Enjoy this peice of shit. In the full version, I will probably put more graphic descriptions of how people die. I decided I need to be more creative in my character deaths. Stabbing, explosions, and guns only get you so far.
Heh... The comments are longer than the snippet. I find that sad. And stupid. I think I shall go jump off the roof now. Goodbye.
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Another news report stating another murder.
“The killer was not seen. There were no survivors, and no explanation for the rampage.”
They’d been going all week. To most citizens, it was horrifying- the gore, the blood, and the way that all matter of people- weak, strong, young, old, even just babies- had their bodies disgraced in such a manner- no person deserved to die that way.
To one, a lean, black and white wolf, it was just boring. He wanted to hear real news. His name was Seth, and he was the killer.
“Crime experts say there is little to no chance of the killer turning themselves in.”
“I would if they just said ‘please.’” Seth snorted, turning off the TV.
Lights flickered all around. " Tails," Teardrop said" We'll never make it. They'll find us and kill us." Tails said " No. We'll find a way out. I gotta plan."
As the sun bared down on their backs, Tear and Tails sneaked to the beach. " We'll have to swim." Tear said with a smile. " Uh... uh... uh..." Tails stammered. " What's wrong?" Tear asked. " Um... nothing." Tails said. Tear dived in the water. " Here goes nothing." Tails said. He followed in after her.
They cam to a small island. Tails looked terrified. Tear grinned."This is it. Calypso's island." They walked towards a garden. A small figure appeared. "Hello." she said. "Welcome,visitors." Tails and Tear asked in union:"Who...are you?"
"I am owner of this garden. Prisoner of this island. I am..."
WAIT TILL I FINISH THE WHOLE STORY. I MIGHT SEND IT TO GET PUBLISHED. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!
~Teardrop
As the sun bared down on their backs, Tear and Tails sneaked to the beach. " We'll have to swim." Tear said with a smile. " Uh... uh... uh..." Tails stammered. " What's wrong?" Tear asked. " Um... nothing." Tails said. Tear dived in the water. " Here goes nothing." Tails said. He followed in after her.
They cam to a small island. Tails looked terrified. Tear grinned."This is it. Calypso's island." They walked towards a garden. A small figure appeared. "Hello." she said. "Welcome,visitors." Tails and Tear asked in union:"Who...are you?"
"I am owner of this garden. Prisoner of this island. I am..."
WAIT TILL I FINISH THE WHOLE STORY. I MIGHT SEND IT TO GET PUBLISHED. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!
~Teardrop
This is the 10 quotes that Danny use in his life and in his stories.
1. Most cant relive life...i relive all.
2. Finding your calling in life is easy... preforming it is the hard part.
3. No you cant stop it...its too powerful for you and me.
4. If we are mobians...are we like the humans.
5. Everyone has a power, a skill and a talent...be your own self...you will find it.
6. No one is good or bad...they are the same thing.
7. Being a hero is hard but earning your reputation at the end is all i need.
8. He win ands we lose...but if we win we fight to win another day
9. Don't judge a hedgehog by its looks...judge it by what choices it chooses
10. Matter is in my heart...my soul...my world...all i need to do is to learn it more.
1. Most cant relive life...i relive all.
2. Finding your calling in life is easy... preforming it is the hard part.
3. No you cant stop it...its too powerful for you and me.
4. If we are mobians...are we like the humans.
5. Everyone has a power, a skill and a talent...be your own self...you will find it.
6. No one is good or bad...they are the same thing.
7. Being a hero is hard but earning your reputation at the end is all i need.
8. He win ands we lose...but if we win we fight to win another day
9. Don't judge a hedgehog by its looks...judge it by what choices it chooses
10. Matter is in my heart...my soul...my world...all i need to do is to learn it more.
To people who recolor ..... LEARN TO DRAW!Im here to say that recolors ar suckish dont hate me for stating the truth heres I want people who draw there own charector NOT RECOLOR to join me to stop this evacuation of skill,dignity,and horrible recolors.If you draw your own charectors then join me and make sure recolors dont ruin fan charectors name it will be tough to stop recolors from growing its up to us to stop here is what you can do 1.If you know someone who recolors get them to stop and help them draw fan charectors 2.post videos on how to draw a fan charectors. 3.get people in your town or on the internet to start drawing. 4.Tell people about this so they can help stop recolors as well. You can make a difference. From the desk of aushedgehog