Hi!^-^ I wanted to post the beginning of my story and please tell me what you think!^-^
Cupid's POV
I sit in my house, slumped at my desk, staring at the flickering candle on my windowsill. Firelight dances across the walls, casting eerie shadows. Cold air blows through the open window, causing the curtains to flutter and the candle to go out. Leaving me alone in the dark, empty room.
What is my purpose in life? Making people fall in love? I don't even know what I'm here for anymore. Rain trickles through the window.
'You're alone too, aren't you?' I ask. Every time there's a storm I talk to her. She's the only one that understands me.
The Storm moans in response.
'No one likes you either. You understand, don't you?'
A howl.
'Poor thing.'
She taps on the roof of my house.
'Let yourself in,' I open the window wider and The Storm comes pouring in.
lightning flashes on my walls and rain pours through the window onto the floor. thunder claps shake the room. The Storm is my only friend and I'm her only friend. I've tried to make her fall in love with someone many times. I still have yet to succeed.
Cupid's POV
I sit in my house, slumped at my desk, staring at the flickering candle on my windowsill. Firelight dances across the walls, casting eerie shadows. Cold air blows through the open window, causing the curtains to flutter and the candle to go out. Leaving me alone in the dark, empty room.
What is my purpose in life? Making people fall in love? I don't even know what I'm here for anymore. Rain trickles through the window.
'You're alone too, aren't you?' I ask. Every time there's a storm I talk to her. She's the only one that understands me.
The Storm moans in response.
'No one likes you either. You understand, don't you?'
A howl.
'Poor thing.'
She taps on the roof of my house.
'Let yourself in,' I open the window wider and The Storm comes pouring in.
lightning flashes on my walls and rain pours through the window onto the floor. thunder claps shake the room. The Storm is my only friend and I'm her only friend. I've tried to make her fall in love with someone many times. I still have yet to succeed.
Ask who died every twenty minutes
Make farting noises and yell "SORRY!"
Yell "Someone, call a doctor! This man is dyeing!"
Read this and say "I should totally do some of these things!"
Say your sorry about her "Accident" then laugh an evil laugh
Tap the person in front of you then look away when they turn around
Say you have a sixth since where you can see dead people
Push the nearest person down and yell "I FOUND THE MURDERER!"
Tell someone that the funiral was fun and you should do it again sometime
If they play a song, yell "IS THIS JUSTIN BIEBER?! CHANGE THE TRACK!"
Mock the person and say "Look at me! Im (So-and-so)! Im dead and stuff!
Scream "AH! DEAD PERSON!" and faint
Make farting noises and yell "SORRY!"
Yell "Someone, call a doctor! This man is dyeing!"
Read this and say "I should totally do some of these things!"
Say your sorry about her "Accident" then laugh an evil laugh
Tap the person in front of you then look away when they turn around
Say you have a sixth since where you can see dead people
Push the nearest person down and yell "I FOUND THE MURDERER!"
Tell someone that the funiral was fun and you should do it again sometime
If they play a song, yell "IS THIS JUSTIN BIEBER?! CHANGE THE TRACK!"
Mock the person and say "Look at me! Im (So-and-so)! Im dead and stuff!
Scream "AH! DEAD PERSON!" and faint