It's good and I can see that you put a lot of work in to it. But there is, of course, room for improvement.
The angle looks a bit confusing, partially because the head and the ears aren't harmonizing very well. The ears are at a tilt to the side and are drawn at a front view, like we are looking directly at them. On their own, they're pretty good. Then you get to looking at the head, which isn't tilted and is at more of an angle rather than being in a front-view. Also, the nose and mouth are slightly off center both with one another and with the general facial structure. The eye is good, but I think it could use more of a detailed shape. Also, you can try adding a line above it to suggest the shape of an eyelid. The hair could use more detail, too. And try shading with a light source and using values that relate to that rather than just laying shades down.
I suggest that you focus on using guidelines in your work. They take a bit more time to use than just sketching something out where it looks like it goes, but the outcome is worth the time. Also, as I always say, reference is always a great help when you're drawing, for both light source and for form. Really take the time to study photos and even people in your everyday life to see how features of faces work together in proportion to one another and how light affects those features. Take every last detail you see in to consideration. Detail is important, even for the simplistic styles of anime and cartoons.
I'm also going to suggest that you use resources and take tips and tricks of professional artists in to consideration. Youtube and DeviantART are always good for free sources, and you can always go to the bookstore or library for books filled with tips and tricks. A name that I always suggest people to look for is
link. He devotes a lot of time in to making tutorials that are detailed and easy to understand and he's recently published a how-to-draw book. He's a good person to start learning from.
But no matter what you do, don't stop practicing. It may take a while to get to where you want to be- Hell, I've been learning to draw for 3 or 4 years and I'm still not as good as I would like to be- but it's rewarding in the end to see how much you improve through practice. It's a long road, but a satisfying one, so don't get discouraged if what you do isn't perfect. Just keep it up and you'll be improving in no time.
Don't give up, good luck, and happy drawing!!!~
![It's good and I can see that you put a lot of work in to it. But there is, of course, room for improvement.
The angle looks a bit confusing, partially because the head and the ears aren't harmonizing very well. The ears are at a tilt to the side and are drawn at a front view, like we are looking directly at them. On their own, they're pretty good. Then you get to looking at the head, which isn't tilted and is at more of an angle rather than being in a front-view. Also, the nose and mouth are slightly off center both with one another and with the general facial structure. The eye is good, but I think it could use more of a detailed shape. Also, you can try adding a line above it to suggest the shape of an eyelid. The hair could use more detail, too. And try shading with a light source and using values that relate to that rather than just laying shades down.
I suggest that you focus on using guidelines in your work. They take a bit more time to use than just sketching something out where it looks like it goes, but the outcome is worth the time. Also, as I always say, reference is always a great help when you're drawing, for both light source and for form. Really take the time to study photos and even people in your everyday life to see how features of faces work together in proportion to one another and how light affects those features. Take every last detail you see in to consideration. Detail is important, even for the simplistic styles of anime and cartoons.
I'm also going to suggest that you use resources and take tips and tricks of professional artists in to consideration. Youtube and DeviantART are always good for free sources, and you can always go to the bookstore or library for books filled with tips and tricks. A name that I always suggest people to look for is [url=http://www.youtube.com/user/markcrilley?ob=4&feature=results_main]Mark Crilley[/url]. He devotes a lot of time in to making tutorials that are detailed and easy to understand and he's recently published a how-to-draw book. He's a good person to start learning from.
But no matter what you do, don't stop practicing. It may take a while to get to where you want to be- Hell, I've been learning to draw for 3 or 4 years and I'm still not as good as I would like to be- but it's rewarding in the end to see how much you improve through practice. It's a long road, but a satisfying one, so don't get discouraged if what you do isn't perfect. Just keep it up and you'll be improving in no time.
Don't give up, good luck, and happy drawing!!!~](http://images5.fanpop.com/image/answers/2508000/2508911_1331676752273.99res_479_300.jpg)
