Hey everyone,
I'm planning to start a fanfic but i need your opinions. Here are my ideas and summary.
Summmary:
15 year old Maddie and 16 year old Prince have done something they shouldn't have. After Prince ends his realtionship with Maddie, she has to go through her unplanned pregnancy alone.
"Cause when you're fifteen,and someone tells you they love you, you're gonna believe them..."
You will Taylor Swift, until they hurt you.
Ideas:
-Maddie is pregnant
-Prince may seem like a jerk in this story
-Prince cheats on Maddie
-Prince's new GF is Natalie Adaams
-Maddie is starting a music career when she gets pregnant
THis story will be posted on quizila.com.
It will be called Don't Let Me Go.
Does this story sound good? I really need to know.
GUYS!!!! I need a stage name for Maddie!
I'm planning to start a fanfic but i need your opinions. Here are my ideas and summary.
Summmary:
15 year old Maddie and 16 year old Prince have done something they shouldn't have. After Prince ends his realtionship with Maddie, she has to go through her unplanned pregnancy alone.
"Cause when you're fifteen,and someone tells you they love you, you're gonna believe them..."
You will Taylor Swift, until they hurt you.
Ideas:
-Maddie is pregnant
-Prince may seem like a jerk in this story
-Prince cheats on Maddie
-Prince's new GF is Natalie Adaams
-Maddie is starting a music career when she gets pregnant
THis story will be posted on quizila.com.
It will be called Don't Let Me Go.
Does this story sound good? I really need to know.
GUYS!!!! I need a stage name for Maddie!
"Ella?"mom asked turning to me..
I squinted my eyes..
"What happened?" I asked..
I don't know if mom answered my question, It felt weird...none of what mom said, I understood.
I heard a siren-paramedics.
***
I woke up in the hospital, it was a pretty spacious room...my grandma was there, so was my grandpa and the Jacksons.
"Thank god you're alive!"Paris said.
'Get Well Soon' balloons were hung around the room.
I squinted my eyes in confusion.
"How're you feeling?"Prince asked..
"Where am I?"I asked,"what happened?"
"A carcrash"grandma told me,"your sister and your brother are doing fine, although your father is temporarily paralized."
"What?"I said.
"You're the only one who is doing well."Blanket smiled.
"I can't remember certain things"I gasped.
"What?"Prince asked.
The doctor came in the room.
"What happened to her?"grandpa asked the doctor.
"Well, good news is..she is not seriously injured..just a few scars.."she replied,"bad news is..she has acute amnesia."
To be continued...
I squinted my eyes..
"What happened?" I asked..
I don't know if mom answered my question, It felt weird...none of what mom said, I understood.
I heard a siren-paramedics.
***
I woke up in the hospital, it was a pretty spacious room...my grandma was there, so was my grandpa and the Jacksons.
"Thank god you're alive!"Paris said.
'Get Well Soon' balloons were hung around the room.
I squinted my eyes in confusion.
"How're you feeling?"Prince asked..
"Where am I?"I asked,"what happened?"
"A carcrash"grandma told me,"your sister and your brother are doing fine, although your father is temporarily paralized."
"What?"I said.
"You're the only one who is doing well."Blanket smiled.
"I can't remember certain things"I gasped.
"What?"Prince asked.
The doctor came in the room.
"What happened to her?"grandpa asked the doctor.
"Well, good news is..she is not seriously injured..just a few scars.."she replied,"bad news is..she has acute amnesia."
To be continued...
Music playing in the background..people dancing around the dancefloor without a care in the world...as if the world just stopped for a moment and it was just us on the dancefloor smiling at each other like we've been hypnotized or something.
Me and Prince were there..dancing without a single care in the world..it was a night to remember..a night I wouldn't forget.
But I would forget everything after the accident after the ball..
"THE BRAKE DOES NOT WORK!"my dad screamed in sheer terror as we were about to crash into a car.
"DAD!"
*wait for the story*
MAOI VALLIDO:)
Me and Prince were there..dancing without a single care in the world..it was a night to remember..a night I wouldn't forget.
But I would forget everything after the accident after the ball..
"THE BRAKE DOES NOT WORK!"my dad screamed in sheer terror as we were about to crash into a car.
"DAD!"
*wait for the story*
MAOI VALLIDO:)