Its very nice! ^^ and Tepig is drawn very well.
i prefer to draw on a white sheet better, but white sheet or not, your drawing is very nice! :)
Well done! :D
Wow, you freehand it? Very nice! My pokemon drawings never come good if i freehand, i look at the pic and draw. I really want to draw a Pokemon character by freehand :'D
Yeah, he's facing a bit on that side, thats why his eyes were like that. And its not that far, i think its not a problem at all. The art still looks fine! :)
Let me say, the eyes are one of the toughest part, especially making 'em look exactly like the original is so not easy. I think your eyes are nice and the position is still fine.