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The Greatest Lie(poem)

You say you always listened,
You say you always cared,
But on my darkest day,
Coldest night,
You left me with no air,

You were supost to be my hero,
The one to save my heart,
You fixed the broken pieces,
But in the end you left your mark,

I thought that we were perfect,
The ones ment to be,
Because of that,
I hate my heart,
And how it lied to me,
©2011 Miyuki Airey
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 rockstar336 posted over a year ago
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sehdt said:
I like it. I certainly understand the sentiment. Well done.
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