PLEASE HELP!

I'm trying to send this poem to my uncle, who is an English teacher, please help add a few lines, or replace some of the words, because I think this poem looks so simple, also if I had any grammer mistakes, please tell me.
and tell me what do u think of it :)


a paper and a pen which writes in blue

I hold it and think,
what should I do?

write about love?friends? or write about you?

the last thought was the best
but where do I start?
I had no clue

thoughts r many
but words r few

so I remembered the old days
it was not a long time ago

how you came to our house
and how did you go

I remember everything
your face, smile, clothes, and even your shoe!

everything you said was interesting
and so funny too!

and within a few days only
I realized
you are the best relative I've ever knew

don't you believe me? I swear! it's true!