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Is this any good?

Help me,
I've fallen again,
No one put you can take away my pain.

My arms are sore from the cuts and tears,
My eyes are pricked with one million tears.

I feel nothing,
Your voice lingers in the back of my mind,
My hearts pulse is on overdrive,
It's about to explode,
Or is that just me and my twisted, craving mind?

emmyliz13 posted over a year ago

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Tremorzluv said:

If you have to ask if your own work is good,why bother writing it all if you don't believe in it.

P.S. There were a few errors.

posted over a year ago

Thanks for the advice...I posted this from my iPod, so it auto corrected some of the words...I do believe in my work, but sometimes I need other peoples opinions...did you like it?

emmyliz13 posted over a year ago

TeamPeeta649 said:

I like it very much.

posted over a year ago

Thanks! It means a lot!

emmyliz13 posted over a year ago

irena83 said:

It's good.

posted over a year ago

Thank you!

emmyliz13 posted over a year ago

zutaradragon said:

i think it's good, but u can't doubt yourself when u write.
if u already think u r gonna fail b4 u write it, u WILL fail by the time it's done.
i've learned this a long time ago when i was drawing.
one or 2 mistakes can b fixed, but an entire paper can't b easily switched.

posted over a year ago

Thanks...and I realized about the mistakes...

emmyliz13 posted over a year ago

Thanks for jet advice!

emmyliz13 posted over a year ago

*the

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