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Is this good for a tweve year old? Its a song called " i miss you" written by a twelve year old.

The pain is too deep to handle. your all i wish for when i blow that candle. even in my sleep you're all i think of. i'll always wonder if you do the same, while you look at the stars up above.every tear that falls from my eyes represents how much i miss you. i picked you out of all the guys. now will you do the same for me? I've tried so hard not to cry but it hurts so much i'd rather die. i think of you day and night. if someone interferes i put up a fight. I miss you. Do you miss me too? is it possible to hurt so much? i miss you and your gentle touch. i wish that you were here with me; holading hands on a branch of a tree. i wish that you could pull me close. i think i took and overdose.... of you. i cant stand it. help me up. ill start a riot. be my love. i'll cry and cry till you reach me... and wait for you to kiss me.
 Monicaluv posted over a year ago
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MattxAliceNine said:
for a 12 year old really good but there holding is misspelled
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Vixie79 said:
That is really good. I imagine by the time she is 17 or so she'll be mind blowing with her own style of course. This writing isn't particularly my favorite, but it's still good writing wise.
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irena83 said:
Cute! ;)
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skillet_luvr said:
Very good for a twelve year old. :)
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