(Not much, but just a small something to keep you guys knowing I haven't forgotten the story)
Saten returned into the barn.
Rarity was still inside as well.
"Well.. Were you successful? Is he gonna stop flirting with AppleJack" Rarity asked anxiously.
"Not yet.. But don't worry, I'm ending this wait here and now" Saten said from off view.
"Oh. That's good to hear- wait, IS THAT A CROSSBOW!?" Rarity cried, her beautiful eyes widening in shock.
Sure enough, Saten was holding a sport crossbow, and loading it with a real arrow and said "Yep.. Ending it here and now" Saten said and pointed the crossbow at Trenderlane as he stood in the background.
"NOO!" Rarity cried, pulling him back.
"I didn't mean 'take care of it' in THAT way!" Rarity cried.
"Well.. He stole AppleJack. So he shou-
"Look Saten.. Keep him alive.. Or I'll tell AppleJack about how you watch her sleep" Rarity said, turning to blackmail.
Hey! That was ONCE!" Saten cried out nervously.
TO BE CONTINUED
Saten returned into the barn.
Rarity was still inside as well.
"Well.. Were you successful? Is he gonna stop flirting with AppleJack" Rarity asked anxiously.
"Not yet.. But don't worry, I'm ending this wait here and now" Saten said from off view.
"Oh. That's good to hear- wait, IS THAT A CROSSBOW!?" Rarity cried, her beautiful eyes widening in shock.
Sure enough, Saten was holding a sport crossbow, and loading it with a real arrow and said "Yep.. Ending it here and now" Saten said and pointed the crossbow at Trenderlane as he stood in the background.
"NOO!" Rarity cried, pulling him back.
"I didn't mean 'take care of it' in THAT way!" Rarity cried.
"Well.. He stole AppleJack. So he shou-
"Look Saten.. Keep him alive.. Or I'll tell AppleJack about how you watch her sleep" Rarity said, turning to blackmail.
Hey! That was ONCE!" Saten cried out nervously.
TO BE CONTINUED
Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw movies (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her more like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for more of my latest story..
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw movies (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her more like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for more of my latest story..