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This poem is also devoted to my ex bf,so tell me what you think about it...

I start to touch you,but i stop...
My sanity tells me to think,to give up...
Cause it's wrong and won't give me anything but pain...
Pain you don't feel...
It's only me fighting for this love,you're just standing here and looking pale into my my sad eyes full of love,that same love u sold a long time ago...
 irena83 posted over a year ago
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stephmfan215 said:
wow thats really good. you have a talent there. if your planning 2 give it 2 him then i would lengthen it. it seems to really show ur feelings. if thats all that you have 2 say to him then this length is perfect. overall its really great!
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posted over a year ago 
reneemonique said:
mmmm very good:) lots of deep thought in it. maybe it could be a bit longer. but i do have to say you are a really good poem writer,you say what you really feel:)
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E-rock said:
Thats really good. :D
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Lovetreehill said:
So emotional, I really love it :)

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posted over a year ago 
brooke9878 said:
It's depressing... but in a way that its empowering.
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