Title:Elfi
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Panel 1
Open in the village of pangate, a run down place where slaves ore the main export

Panel 2
over head of a children running in the street

panel 3
a boy(sage) leading a girl(Elfi) and running from a butcher(off panel)
Buthcer:"Hey get back here with that!"
Sage:"come on...this way"

panel 4
boy(Sage) leading the girl(Elfi) down an ally way
sage:"we gotta go.. this way, come on."

panel 5
boy and girl standing at a wall
sage:"oh no... a dead end"

Panel 6
boy and girl looking and man off panel shadowing over them
Man:"you kids just make a huge mistake"

panel 7
boy(sage) looking over at girl(elfi) who is now crying
Sage:"dont worry Elfi i wont let anything happen to you"

Panel 8
sage arms stretched out as to protect Elfi
"i wont let you hurt her"

Panel 9
letterbox of devilish smile

panel 10
man pushes boy(sage) to the away(towards reader)

panel 11
man with one hand on girl(Elfi)
man:"well kid, hows 'bout you give my the girl and we call it even"

Panel 12
Boy sage running at the man
Sage:"get your hands off her!"

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panel 1
later...boy(sage) and girl(Elfi) sitting on hill outside of village

Panel 2
Boy(sage) badly beaten
sage:"...sigh"

panel 3
Boy(sage) hanging his head down, girl(Elfi) eating a peice of bread
Elfi:"thanks..."

Panel 4
Boy(sage) looking up with a smile
sage:"sigh.."

panel 5
Boy(sage) now standing up
Sage:"come on, we be need to leave before night falls"

panel 6
Girl(elfi) now standing beside Boy(sage)
Elfi:"yhea i guess your right"

panel 7
boy start to walk away girl standing stil both silhouetted
Sage:"one day im going to leave this all behind"

Panel 8
girl(elfi) chasing after boy(sage)
Elfi:"sage...wait"

panel 9
girl(elfi) grabbing boy's(sage's) hand
Elfi:"promise.. promise you wont leave me..."

panel 10
boy(sage) blushing
Sage:"i promise

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panel 1:
boy(sage) and girl(Elfi) holding hands on hill over looking (pangate)village
Elfi:"and promise we will stay together, forever and ever?"
Sage:"i promise"

Panel 2
close up on girls(elfi's) face
Elfi:"cross your heart and hope to die?"

panel 3
Sages face looking mischevious
Sage:"well....."

Panel 4
girl(elfi) angry/sad face
Elfi:"SAGE!?!"

Panel 5
boy(sage) kissing girl(elfi) on the nose
Sage:"of course..."

Panel 6
boy(sage) now away from girl(Elfi's cheek)
Sage:"forever and ever.."

Panel 7
6 years later...Sage is now 16 and Elfi is now 14, sage, is packing his things, crying and bleeding, Elfi in the background
Elfi:"sage?, Sage are you okay? what are you doing?
Sage:"im leaving"

panel 8
Sage now facing Elfi blood and tears rolling down his face
Elfi" leaving? why? and why are you bleeding?"
Sage:"i cannot stay here any longer, they treat us like slaves they beat us, and i.i..."

Panel 9
sage, now hanging his head down with tears in his eyes
Sage:"i dont want to see you hurting anymore.."
Elfi:"sage..."

Panel 10
sage looking at Elfi Sagin in the forground and Elfi being in the background
sage:"come with me"
Elfi:"n..no"

Panel 11
close up on Elfi (now crying) face
Elfi:"my place is here, with you"

Panel 12
Sage finishing packing
Sage:"no it's not, not anymore."
Elfi:"but...sage..."
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panel 1
Sage silhouetted as he leaves the room in back ground, Elfi in the forground
Elfi:"i...i.."
Sage:"Goodbye elfi"

Panel 2
Sage leaving village(in background)
Sage:"cross my heart..."

Panel 3
years later...Sage is now 18 and a soilder for the army standing outside his village (pangate) now in ruins
Sage:"Elfi, im home..."

panel 4
planes fly overhead of the village


that's the end of part one hope you guys enjoyed
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Joymofo